Short Story #11
Glassy green eyes met icy gray ones across the mahogany desk, the only thing separating the men and the thickening atmosphere in the small, but cramped room.
โThis can only work one way,โ the goon in the blue powder suit from behind the desk rose to his full height thinking that it would send a threat to the man still seated in the ugly plush green chair. The gray-eyed man didnโt flinch. He just sat there with a smirk on his stern, but handsomeย face that the goon wished he could wipe off with just a backhand slap, but he had heard things about this Monsieur. โYou have to agree with my terms otherwise the deal is off.โ
Jean-Pierre Papin sadistically smiles. โI work only for money. If you want loyalty, get a dog.โ
โThey say you are the best!โ
โAnd I am the best, but I donโt work on your terms. I work on mine. If you think you can do the job better than me, then you have no need for my help.โ
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ooooh. this is an edge-of-the-seat read! you wrote the tension well!
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Thank you, Rosema! ๐
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always. โค
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Definitely sets the stage. And dogs do set the bar on loyalty. Who is this cool customer, and what line of work…
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Thank you for your kind comment! This is a new character that I am working on. I hope to feature more of him soon. ๐
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Simply loved reading it.
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Thank you. This makes me smile. ๐
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I can feel a “full blown” story in the making here..
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Thank you. I’m thinking of writing it in series form for now. ^^
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